Story Board Workshop

In Ged Haney's story board workshop we were each given different stories and had to create a storyboard for them, this was the story I got:

Three cowboys are playing cards. Each appears suspicious of the other two. one pulls a hidden ace of spades from his sleeve, and puts it on the table. Another one pulls a hidden ace of spades from his sleeve, and puts it on the table. The third already had the ace of spades, unplayed, in his hand. He pulls a gun and shoots the other two..

And here is my storyboard interpretation for that story.

When I showed it to Ged, he said he like how i cut mid action on the part where bearded cowboy reaches for a card to show that it's his deck of cards in the next shot. He also said that I should have left the reveal that the moustache cowboy had an ace of spades until after he shoots the other two.